Sunday 1 September 2013

Wonder Woman in London re-edited

Most extensively, the first chapter of Wonder Woman in London has been re-edited. I felt the needless frustrations of Steve Trevor was out of sync with my later writing style. It flows better - although I'd understand if you preferred the humour of the original.

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  1. Posted in chapter 1 (maybe out of place), better here. I agree now it is much more in line with the show and your style evolution. In any case even before was ok: not only for the humour but also because it is interesting for the readers to see and the evolution and the changes in the style of a writer.

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  2. Thanks, I'm glad you agree. I hope to have a new story in a couple of weeks.

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  3. Following previous posts I wanted to share a couple of other personal picks for stories characters (do not want to influence other readers but just share my views. If some readers feels that this is going to "spoil" his fantasy / pleasure to read the stories, please tell me, I will stop immediately).

    Cardinal Mendo: I imagine him like Vittorio Gassman in its late years (its bearded version). Probably influenced by its charisma as one of the italians best actors

    Serena Rocca: Olga Kurkulina, Mother Russia in Kick-Ass II movie

    Marsha Cross: Pam Grier, not in her younger age but in her mid forties (as in 1997 Jackie Brown)

    Wainting for next story !!





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  4. I quite like your casting ideas. There is more than one interpretation of a character. E.g. Olga and Astrid have the Serena Rocca look.

    I'm glad Mendo's charm came through. Gassman has the right kind of eyes for him. Mendo of course has an English accent. I could see a few past English actors playing him, especially George Sanders.

    Pam Grier is a good call for Marsha. I can imagine that...

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  5. Is there any way you could put a file up containing the complete story? That makes it easy to get a complete copy of the story.

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  6. I suspect I could. What format was you thinking about? Are PDFs still in vogue?

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  7. Html or RTF is fine. Some people have trouble with PDF.

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  8. Hi, Author just to quickly touch base and have news about the progressing of the new story. No pressure but just curiosity. How is it going ? When can we expect it ? Any anticipation (like in the tv series when they show you something from the next episode as a promo) ? Good work !!!

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  9. Hi, Wonder Woman in Tokyo is coming soon...

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